Rejection - Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 13, 2011.

  1. Feedback for the short story 
     
    #1 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 13, 2011
  2. It's a cool story, but I don't get it. Are there going to be more chapters, or is that it?!?!?!

    Good writing though. Just some grammatical/spelling errors to check.

    But great!
     
    #2 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 13, 2011
  3. Cheers  You'll understand soon enough
     
    #3 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 13, 2011
  4. Very nice but you might want to work on a few things. Punctuation one of them.
     
    #4 Storallelite, Jul 14, 2011
  5. This was a quick thought in my head btw so I wasn't proof reading the chapters :)
     
    #5 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 14, 2011
  6. This is based off a real person I know, who has this in their life! He doesn't deserve it at all cos he's awesome and not a complete dickhead like everyone else!
     
    #6 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 14, 2011
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