Greetings, slave readers! Leave all your critiques, questions, and theories here! Seriously, say what you think will happen next. It helps me a lot with not thinking of new plot elements.
Well. After several re-reads, I think it would have been much better if I hadn't fallen asleep four minutes before you posted. As for theories, maybe Cheese will actually explain something to poor Stora.
Yes. Because I'll certainly kill a character I just introduced, in the first few paragraphs. Mhmm. Yep. That's what I'll do. Yeah. Good plan.
:lol: My suggestion: The chaos of forums today. Somehow work it in, like how it's ruled by noobs and the trolls are nearly extinct. Or the hugw thing that happened with Yarmes, iG, ect. Or ASW2012
I'm not in on the first chapter!? Outrageous, clearly Cheese cares not for my feelings. Boo hoo hoo. But seriously, you've made me furious with anticipation, GJ.
Waah you guys are so mean! Thinking of killing me off and it's only the first chapter :'( Anyway great stuff cheese! I wasn't expecting the memory loss thing.