Hi everyone. I'm going to write a story. WARNING: it might get extremely boring and I might ditch the idea so be prepared Prologue I flopped onto my big bed. Today had been a long day and I couldn't wait to sleep. I glanced at my clock on the wall of my room. 9:00. Bed time! I crawled under my blanket and closed my eyes. A minute later, there was a knock on my door. "Come in," I said. The door opened and my mom walked in. "Goodnight honey," she said and turned the light off. "Night," I said and snuggled into my bed. I awoke to a small scream and a thump. I glanced at my clock. 12:00. I heard soft footsteps coming towards my room. They stopped at my door. The door was opened with a small creak. In came the footsteps, coming right to my bed. I looked up into black glittering eyes and dripping hands holding a huge knife above my heart. "Remember my name little *****. Mirosoku Kayama." He said. I screamed as the he plunged the knife home. Then, all was black. ********4 years later********** Chapter 1 I awoke to a bright light shining into my face. I blinked and covered my eyes. "Ah, you're awake. Finally. Let us get to business." A scratchy voice said. The light was turned off and I removed my arm from my eyes. A young man stood over me. "I am Koran. You shall call me master little slave." He said, cackling. "First of all, I'm not little. I'm 16. Second of all, you're not my master." I said, glaring at him. "You can have it the easy way or the hard way. " he said. "I don't care! I'll never be your slave!" I jumped off the bed and ran to the other side of the room. "Hard way it is then." He said and started chanting. "Oma nu say lo tai gooshoo." He said over and over again. I felt a tug and then a streak of pain searing through my shoulders and then my head felt on fire. I screamed and arched my neck. I felt another tug in the midst of my agony and the next thing I knew, I was flying through the air towards the man. I stopped in mid air a foot in front of him and crashed to the ground. "You are mine. You will obey me. I will name you Shou." He said in a strangely comforting voice. My eyes were drooping and I could hardly think straight. Wasn't I supposed to be mad at this guy? Why would I be mad at my master. "Yes master. I will obey." I said and slumped to the floor. The world blackened around me and I was swallowed into a black void of confusion.
Chapter 2 I awoke in a small windowless room. I was laying on a small cot made of hard and dirty straw. I sat up and looked around. A small wooden table was perched on a ragged rug with a tiny stool by it. A small bowl sat on the table. I got up and went over to it. In the bowl was a hard piece of bread and some oatmeal. Sticking out of the oatmeal was a small plastic spoon. I picked it up and stuck it into the oatmeal. I had just yanked out the spoon covered in oatmeal when a voice called out, "Master is waiting for you! Come out and follow me." I plopped down the spoon and walked out the door. A boy about 12 was standing there. He had sandy brown hair and blue eyes. "I'm Bren. Master I waiting so we should get going." He said and walked away. I followed him as he led me through a big corridor. He led me to a big set of door made of gold. "Wait here." He said and knocked on the gigantic door on the right. "Come in!" Master's voice called out. Bren opened the doors and led me into the room. The room was magnificent. Covered in silk, the walls were high and colorful. In front, sitting on a small throne mad of gold, was Master. He beckoned and Bren pushed me forward. I stumbled and walked nervously toward Master. "Shou, I have a job for you." Master said as I can to a stop in front of the throne. "I want you to find Miko Dakis and give him this letter. You are not to give it to anyone else but him. Tell him it is from me. Bren will give you a map and some money. Also, take this dagger. I want you to kill Miko if he says no. Alright?" He said. "Yes Master." I replied. Bren walked up and held out a belt with a dagger sheathed to it, a map, and a small brown bag I presumed to contain the money.
Chapter 2 I awoke in a small windowless room. I was laying on a small cot made of hard and dirty straw. I sat up and looked around. A small wooden table was perched on a ragged rug with a tiny stool by it. A small bowl sat on the table. I got up and went over to it. In the bowl was a hard piece of bread and some oatmeal. Sticking out of the oatmeal was a small plastic spoon. I picked it up and stuck it into the oatmeal. I had just yanked out the spoon covered in oatmeal when a voice called out, "Master is waiting for you! Come out and follow me." I plopped down the spoon and walked out the door. A boy about 12 was standing there. He had sandy brown hair and blue eyes. "I'm Bren. Master I waiting so we should get going." He said and walked away. I followed him as he led me through a big corridor. He led me to a big set of door made of gold. "Wait here." He said and knocked on the gigantic door on the right. "Come in!" Master's voice called out. Bren opened the doors and led me into the room. The room was magnificent. Covered in silk, the walls were high and colorful. In front, sitting on a small throne mad of gold, was Master. He beckoned and Bren pushed me forward. I stumbled and walked nervously toward Master. "Shou, I have a job for you." Master said as I can to a stop in front of the throne. "I want you to find Miko Dakis and give him this letter. You are not to give it to anyone else but him. Tell him it is from me. Bren will give you a map and some money. Also, take this dagger. I want you to kill Miko if he says no. Alright?" He said. "Yes Master." I replied. Bren walked up and held out a belt with a dagger sheathed to it, a map, and a small brown bag I presumed to contain the money. "Goodbye master." I said and turned. Bren led me to the stables where a stable boy about 13 handed me the reins of Star, a tan horse with a white star on her forehead. "Master trusts you." He said. I took the reins and hoisted myself up onto the saddle. I saluted Bren and the stable boy and kicked my horse. We galloped out onto the field and into the forest.
Um wat??? Began to read....and then I began to read it in fast forward, imagining the hundreds of cliche movies/show/anime/books I've seen or read... Completely lost me at..12:00
I'm ONLY A TEEN AND I WRITE BETTER THE U! DAMN IT PUT SOME MORE DETAIL MORE LIVLY ACTIONS ITS SO BORING I MONENTARLY WENT BLANK ONLY TO DISCOVER 5 Secs of my life was wasted.....