Random Poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Harperk-, Nov 18, 2011.

  1. This is a poem that I wrote for my grabdfather, or Tata as my 2 year old brother and I called him. He died July 2011. I wrote this the night before he died....


    I may not have known you
    My whole life...
    But in thoses years
    You've made such an impact on me,
    And I'm happy to say
    That I couldn't be more
    Greatful to call you my Tata

    I know Lewis can't exactly
    Tell you,
    But I know he feels the same.
    I can tell that he loves you alot,
    We all do.

    If he could,
    I know he'd say "Tata,
    I Love You."
    But at this moment he can't,
    So I speak for us both
    When I say
    "I Love You"
     
  2. Truly touching.
     
  3. I like it, because unlike a lot of poems, it focused more on the message than on fancy rhymes and syllable combinations. :)