Rage

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Ahdragos (01), Sep 24, 2010.

  1. The rage consumes, it burns so hot;
    Obliterating rational thought.
    A cathartic feeling to ease the pain.
    A hateful obsession in my brain.
    Hateful thoughts sow vile seeds,
    And vile seeds grow evil deeds.

    So now I do these malicious things
    And revel in all the pain it brings.
    And in this game no one wins,
    As I perpetrate these deadly sins.
    All my hate has opened the door,
    And now the hate will spread some more.

    The rage corrupts anything in contact
    Which just furthers my infernal contract.
    My heart as dark and black as night
    I avoid doing what’s morally right.
    So I stand before you an evil man,
    Spreading the pain as best I can.
     
  2. Title obviously u related.
     
  3. Stop being a hater.
     
  4. Agreed. This is a well written poem, and a good topic too.
     
  5. this is awesome poem
     
  6. I came......twice
     
  7. Yeah...um...you might wanna...I don't know...get some help?
     
  8. Awesum poem!!! Great rhymes and use of words!
     
  9. I wonder if the person in your poem feels any rage?