Price of A Hero:

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -AppleSauce-, Jun 12, 2013.

  1. I cradle her in my arms...as she dies...no not dying, I tell myself over and over in my head. This can't be, so close, when I've made it so far. For it to end like this...

    I hug her close but gently as tears stream down my soot covered face, I rock gently back and forth in my fractured armor. Back and forth. In agony I rage screaming at the heavens above. Cursing the gods on this gore covered battlefield.

    I look into her eyes...
    And she's looking back, smiling. A sad solemn smile. Her wonderful smile.

    "It's ok." She's tells me with that wonderful smile. And for a split second I believe her.

    But how can it be when the person I truly love is dying in my arms, when that person is you. I yell in anguish. This pain...oh this pain.

    The gods torment me.

    She looks at me, raising her hand she strokes my face and utters her last breath.

    "I love you."

    I stare in disbelief as her aura fades from my conscience.
    Others rush to help me as I fall.

    This pain..this merciless agony..

    At least we will die together my love...my dearest. Dearest love. And I close my eyes for the final time and let this anguish pain fade away....
     
  2. I shed a tear...a single tear.





    This was deep. :cry:
     
  3. That was some intense stuff bro
     
  4. Maybe you should have described what happened and then have this be the end of the chapter.
     
  5. It's a short story, part of my series Etched in Memory