Preview to mah story An Orc ned jabahafar wakes up gets his club and starts smashing things. first sentence
That's a rubbish opener, it looks like a five year old wrote it. No ones gonna read it because of rep. Knowing you you'll abandon it after two paragraphs. And I thought you quit
How so I know I'm really bad at intros. But what am I supposed to say the Orc gazed into the sunset with a fire in his eyes.knowing it was time he picked up his axe and starting marching toward the imperial city. is that better
i sawe a story tht was kinda like that sentence :O but i forgot exactly wat it said its something like.... a man come's and he picks up a stick and come's and hits the "boat" the dad and the son were never seen again! or something like tht lol my friend showed it to me it was a story somebody used in a rly big important standardized test or something lol