Well since IRONhulk has decided to expose me I might as well tell you my story. I was the son of Julius caesar the one no one ever heard about. Agustus destroyed all records of me existing. Old Julius was proud of me I was with him in his campaign in Gaul. I had my own legion we were called the legion of death because we painted a skull on our shields and painted them black. The Germans and Romans alike feared us. When my father was murdered by his So called "friends" and the civil war broke out, I decided to stake my claim in. We defeated Marc Antony but agustus took the credit and banished me. This is where my story begins this marks the end of humanity... Give me all the criticism you want I just wanted to see how writing feels.
It's ok except u spelled augustus wrong it's spelled like the month of august. The month came from Augustus Caesar's name. You also spelled Mark Antony wrong. You spelled the last name correct though. Other than that it's good. Next time instead of rushing spell check then post. ~ Veronica