Mister please explain away These feelings I feel today They are so foreign to me Like I was blind but now I see Held down for Forever it seems Tearing me apart at the seams Incarceration of my heart No longer, a fresh start these chains have been broken By a ladies words soft spoken Intriguing and totally new to me They have me where I can barely breathe It's been long, way too long Since I've felt it this strong Wait, I'm a lier I've never felt it make me fly higher Soaring through the clouds Just talking to her makes me proud If I can only make her mine I'd be happy till the end of time But I'm not good enough She's too good for me, I'm too rough What do i do and say To keep her interested another day I don't know so i sing the blues Rack my brain till I find a clue So mister please explain in words I understand Make me see how to show her I'm a good man Because i can't do it alone I need you as the cornerstone
Wow. That's really sweet. I think in a couple places your meter falters a little bit, but that's nothing a little refinement can't fix.