Positive or Negative Feeling~ Feedback/Discussion thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Littlejapgirl (01), Nov 20, 2011.

  1. Hiya~ I just wrote a new story called 'Positive or Negativd Feeling' and I'd be very happy if everyone could read it. I would also like feedback
     
    #1 *Littlejapgirl (01), Nov 20, 2011
  2. It's awesome! I love it!
     
    #2 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 20, 2011
  3. I made a lot of typos though
     
    #3 *Littlejapgirl (01), Nov 20, 2011
  4. Still good. Just gotta work on that.
     
    #4 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 20, 2011
  5. It's really good and unique. Awesome :)
    And the typos didn't bother me ;)
     
    #5 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 20, 2011
  6. It's good and as long as you don't bring out werewolves and turn it into some sort of twilight fanfic, I like it

    Love,
    -Han x
     
    #6 *HannahMarie55 (01), Nov 20, 2011
  7. is it like twilight? Oh shoot. Sorry. I denfinitly WONT bring out the werewolves.
     
    #7 *Littlejapgirl (01), Nov 21, 2011
  8. Nah it's not it's just where some vampires go

    Love,
    - Han x
     
    #8 *HannahMarie55 (01), Nov 21, 2011
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