Portals Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by wtfwtf, Sep 25, 2010.

  1. Post feedback about Portals.
     
  2. What's he loo like

    What's it like where he is. Make it longer
     
  3. Sorry forgot about that and you can still sign up just going to be side character but will be used
     
  4. Going to post tommorow tired after school dance nite
     
  5. Will acept helpful criticism
     
  6. Chapter 2 posted
     
  7. I like it. Post more, these short chapters kill me lol.

    iZ
     
  8. Will post next one at after dinner or now
     
  9. Chapter 3 posted
     
  10. MUAHAHAHAHSHSHAHAHAHA. I like it.

    iZ