PokeDex/Pokemon Quest Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Jul 5, 2010.

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    The PokeDex/Feedback Thread for 
    Pokemon! Yes this will serve as my Feedback thread for my new story, but not only that, I'll post which new Pokemon showed up in that certain chapter so that I can give you and idea to base off the Pokemon featured.

    Featured Pokemon in Chapter 1:

    Treeko: 
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    Torchic:
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    PokeDex:
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    iPoke:
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    That's all for now, remember, keep reading. I'll be posting more soon.

    iZaln

    Chapter Two is up!

    New Pokemon featured in Chapter Two of Pokemon Quest:

    Poochyena:
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    Tailow:
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    Swablu:
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    Eevee:
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    Flareon:
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    Trainer Sprites

    Zaln:
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    Bastion:
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    Rika:
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    iZaln

    Chapter Three is here!

    New Pokemon Featured in Chapter 3:

    Shroomish:
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    Bagon:
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    Trapinch:
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    Trainer Sprites:

    Nurse Joi:
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    Pokemon Hippie:
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    Colonial:
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    Well that's that for Chapter 3! Stay tuned for Chapter 4 where our heroes continue their quest to uncover what is happening in the Petalburg Forest!

    iZaln


    The Special Chapter is up and about my friends! I wish everyone a  Happy Canada Day and 4th of July!!! 

    Anyway, here are the characters:

    Zaln:
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    Bastion:
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    Nurse Joi:
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    Pokemon Hippie:
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    Nurse Happi:
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    So Happy Canada Day and 4th of July once again! Take care and enjoy everyone!

    iZaln
     
  2. I hope everyone had an awesome weekend vacation and holiday. I am at the second to last chapter of the PetalBurg Woods Saga! So what will happen to the PokeNerd and what were his motives?! And what will happen to our heroes who were the victims of the explosion? The next chapter shall show you what occurs! Keep reading. 

    Anyway, here are some pictures for you guys!

    Nincada:
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    Wurmple:
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    Roselia:
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    Trainer Sprites:

    PokeNerd:
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    Items:

    PokeBalls:
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    Well that's all I have at the moment. I hope you're all enjoying this story! More to come soon!

    iZaln
     
  3. Do I still get my special part in the story from having the 100th post on the other feedback thread

    ~iDan~
     
  4. Yes you do.

    iZaln
     
  5. Kk thanx. I have a feeling I know what the part is. When is the next chapter go up?

    ~iDan~
     
  6. Today or tomorrow.

    iZ
     
  7. Okey dokey

    ~iDan~
     
  8. Pokemon Quest Chapter 5 is up! So, the next thing: who is the Gym Leader of Rustboro? Will Bastion and Zaln be able to take them on? And who is this mysterious Dan Cahill, and what is his link to Bastion the his father, the renowned Prof. Birch? Find out some of the answers in the next chapters! Stay tuned!

    Okay, here are the Pokemon of Chapter 5:

    Mudkip (Kipz):
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    Lotad (Tado):
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    Vibrava:
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    Trainer Sprites:

    Dan Cahill:
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    There's that! Well, expect the next chapter to be coming soon!

    iZaln
     
  9. Dunno if it's too late, but if you could, I wanna nickname my pokemon? The swablu is Poppy, the Eevee is Thyme. I name my pokemon after spices. :3
     
  10. Oh and also. Great new chapter!
     
  11. @Rika
    Sure, I could nickname em. And thanks.

    iZaln
     
  12. Yay face! : D And you're quite welcome, Zaln-hubby!
     
  13. Oh...was I supposed to post on the story thread? Sorry bout that great job anyways.
     
  14. Thanks. And this is where to post. Not the story thread .

    iZaln
     
  15. Good job Zaln!
     
  16. I love it. It's so...professional.
     
  17. Thanks guys! I appreciate any comment and suggestions. Hope you guys have as much fun reading this as I had writing this. I was struggling to get this chapter done because today I was busy bicycling and swimming lol.

    iZaln
     
  18. I love it! Good job. Honestly that's nit what I would nickname my pokemon though. I nickname my pokemon after charecters from my fav tv shows. Lol

    ~iDan~
     
  19. Lol, I needed to introduce that... Plus I wanted to make you act as the superior and cocky guy.

    iZaln
     
  20. :cry: wishing i didnt break my ipod :(