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I'll start: The way I see Was never there The words I knew we're always wrong The life I lived never strong The gun weighing down The boom of a cracking sound The silence to tribute A sorrowful life Just going round To heaven a ground A lost soul to find It was never alright
lol... me likes... good poems all... heres mine >>> " " Words become broken when laid on fragile gestures, unto a fixed hand, whom is watching closely upon hallowed turf, no false being or distempered in the mind, not a little anger that rises beneath the cold cold earth. Wait for the call and feel the heavy footsteps, shake your head in disbelief and throw out your hands, you then realise you cannot move another step, demons push through every silken gland. Then in a white room your bidy lies there, rolling and crawling and howling so fierce, faces so repulsive laugh at what you have become
There in your hand is a dagger to pierce. entitled "the insanity of you" sorry caught the button on mobile by accident lol...
Good poem, nice vocabulary. Listen to waves rushing past On the edge of sanity threatened to be pushed On the edge of a cliff hanging by a thread It is the unspoken words said to be hushed