I wrote this poem recently and wondered what you thought. I might post more poems later. Individuality Be unique from others And different from the rest Show who you truly are At your very best. You can be who like Creed and colour matter not For if you are just you You'll be liked a lot Nobody can stop you From being who you are Because on the inside you must know You are a shining star! Use your freedom wisely And be unique in every way Because you are so special Each and every day! Music, makeup, clothes Thing for which you really care From how you live your life To how you style your hair These are your strengths Your assets, your qualities It's what separates us Making you different to me Nobody can stop you From being who you are Because on the inside you must know You are a shining star!
Forget the haters I thought it was great. And I love your point. Keep on writing even if so people don't like. The only reason someone is mean to you is because the anger within as taken over- Castaneda
parts? the whole freaking thing was a jumbled mess. nothing flowed together. nothing made sense. certainly seems like an emo wrote it.