poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Balto573, Oct 20, 2013.

  1. Let me tell you a story in the form of a dream
    Don't know why I have to tell it but I know what it means:

    It was a summer day
    they all start the same way don't they
    I didn't know this day wouldn't be like the rest
    The day I took two to the chest
    No one would care
    If I died there
    At that point I saw something
    My life flashed by
    All it showed was I'm a depressed guy
    Begging for the bullet to end it
    Not having the courage to do it
    Praying for this day to come
    Don't know why I had been so damn dumb
    If I had known I would have said goodbye
    Now it's over and I don't know why
    So much hope down the drain
    The only thing it ended was my pain

    (Not my best poem a little incoherent but it's two a.m. I'm trying ok I literally spent thirty seconds makings this)(as a side note I probably won't even remember making this so don't ask about it)
     
  2. I legitamitly have no recollection whatsoever of making this was I sleep kawing?
     
  3. Your poem was really good
     
  4. You had to be jaming to pod when writing this.
     
  5. Sounds like a rap, great peom
     
  6. To be honest I looked these up its plagiarized from 8 songs I sleep kawed and this is what happened
     
  7. So I'm gonna go to sleep soon if I make any threads while I sleep kill me now