poem/rap

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Social_Darwinism, Nov 28, 2014.

  1. was bored so decided to come up with a poem!

    Please let me know what you think:

    Ill never amount to nothin and no I ain't bluffin. People think I'm a fool sadly it's true. They think I'm stupid they think I'm useless they think I'm unable to show them what proof is. i try so hard to hide my heart but it is slowly falling apart. Sometimes i just sit and think is this all i am good for? Playing kingdoms at war? There has got to be more! But i get up and claim tomorrow's a new day! Maybe if i just pray it will make this pain go away! But it doesn't and I'm tired of amounting to nothing. Pretending I don't give a **** and my hearts a brick! But that's a lie all i ever do is cry. And try to make my life look like It's full of pride! Well at least i tried....
     
  2. Well that's a depressing poem
     
  3. Tie my hand restrain my mind nothing can hide from the truth of time hide in the shadows live in the dark let the sin fill your heart devour your soul live as you plz because of them you are never free
    From yours truly the crazy people in my dreams
    Wall me what you think
     
  4. I like your rap/poam
     
  5. Mighty Mouse that was good and so was op's
     
  6. Ty I have more I might post
     
  7. Please do mouse
     
  8. Dreams that always fade love that never stays hate that decays any source of light that remains. I know it's short but still one of my favorites
     
  9. Life is nothing it seems always on the go chasing a dream heading down the rabbit hole being a good sheep climbing up the corporate pole deeper and deeper we go when will it end only god will know
     
  10. Not bad. But was this supposed to be a comedy act because I laughed.
     
  11. Glad for your feed back happy to make you laugh at the least
     
  12. "I'm a lyrical gangster thats packing mad heat. If ya feel a little dizzy from my rhymes you better take a seat. I conjure up the words to express my beat. What can I say, Im organized like an excel spreadsheet.

    Preheat my mind to three-hundred sixty degrees I fly like a butterfly and sting like a ******* bee! I roll hard, ask my broad, If you need to find me you betta send me a postcard.

    I can't stop, even if Im being trailed by mass cops. Dump it into third, hear my turbo chirp as I'm flying over hilltops. One hundred thirty nine in a fifty five **** all you haters, you'll never catch me alive.

    My stealth and speed make a ninja look like a snail. Even if I get pinched I got fans that'll pay my bail. Pass, puff, light it up on an inhale. Nothing like the sensation of the chronic on a deep exhale.

    Take a look around, I'm pretty ******* hard to find. I never worked for the Feds, but Ive made a few resign."
     
  13. Top that
     
  14. I like cake
     
  15. Lol I don't rap
     
  16. I clenched my asscheeks, ready to blast off
    Fecal fetish, not to be ashamed of
    If it comes out brown, I will never frown
    She will wear it on her head like a crown
    My junk broke in half, I cry every time
    I hope they can fix it, I'll pay a dime
    Pounding in glee, I ravaged that anus
    This sex tape is gonna make me famous
    Suddenly, I felt a great amount of grease
    I pulled my junk out of the vaginal crease

    Top that.
     
  17. Your lyrics give me hope
     
  18. As I sit here thinking of what's to be nothing good ever comes to me only vale and hate accompanies me down this long and lonely road no one walks beside me only beating me down saying my dreams will never be will you also beat on me
     
  19. As I sit here thinking of what's to be nothing good ever comes to me only vale and hate accompanies me down this long and lonely road no one walks beside me only beating me down saying my dreams will never be will you also beat on me