Poem for d_bo

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Mar 6, 2012.

  1. Since you think all writing is fail, I'll give it a shot anyways. A little free verse.

    Dear Mr. Critic
    Sorry not to please you
    Did you expect us
    To sit here and feed you?

    We are not servants.
    Or whatever you want to call it.
    We're writers and proud
    So screw rhyming.

    I'm not a poet
    I'll never be one
    But I hope you enjoyed
    Or at least laughed.

    ~Lunar-Eclipse 
     
  2. *sniff*

    That was beauitiful!
     
  3. I loved it, it went into my soul.
     
  4. Found it! ;) And i like it! Noice!
     
  5. :D Glad you guys liked. I want d_bo to see.
     
  6. Oh i wanna post a poem for him too. Sorry, hope ya don't mind.

    Your a fail troll
    A little bowl of hate
    Go die in a hole
    I hate you
    I don't know how to write any type of poems
    Orange
     
  7. Best piece of the day.  nicely done. xD 
     
  8. Thanks  but i think yours was way more well written
     
  9. Thank u. Tee hee. X3
     
  10. Noone read the 'don't feed troll signs' anymore ? Lol.
     
  11. Yesh we r!! :D -beams with pride- lol
     
  12. -sticks flag in ground proudly- WE CLAIM THIS LAND
     
  13. -records all events, and makes a record of claiming this- (written like a scholarly BAWS. XD)
     
  14. Feeding trolls is wonderful.
     
  15. xD

    My poem trashes no-one though. I state facts and only facts.
    I don't enjoy insulting people. I merely enjoy entertaining people.
     
  16. Pheefers: The entertainer. Who is a pacifist. And enjoys waffle made of cornicopium.
     
  17. Hmm.

    I'm not a poet
    I'm a writer
    So why am I writing a poem?
    I'd like to state some facts.

    One, you're hated, d_bo.
    Two, we're not your slaves.
    We're free.
    We'll take that to the grave.

    Three, I'd like a sammich
    Four, poor you,
    You want one too

    Five, too bad, it's mine now
    I'll eat it if I want.

    Sammich is mine.
    Hating rights are mine.
    A stitch in time.
    Saves nine. :D

    Cheesy poems for the win.