"Penance"

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Static, Sep 5, 2015.

  1. "Penance"

    Love wasnt what I thought it was
    when I got mixed up in it
    Thought it was unconditional
    until I had to trust a chick!

    Her warmth turned ice cold
    like her heart was encrusted in
    the most frozen of all snow
    same heart she'd use to crush me with!

    I mentioned unconditional
    but hers came with conditions.
    Her love was unconventional
    and locked me in her prison!

    Its hard to escape this
    and ignore all the pressure
    You know me, Im no trophy
    to sit at home on her dresser!

    Love wasnt warm til I lost it
    And my company is what was costed,
    But for years I was her hostage
    nauseous, and mentally exhausted.

    I had to break free
    flex my wings and try to fly again
    I hated being hated
    every single day, I would die again.

    My writing was therapeutic,
    I just took music and used it.
    My heart was battered and abused
    but fusing art seemed to sooth it!

    So a broken man emerged
    but with a whole new confidence.
    I just hit the road
    without a care or consequence!

     
  2. lol its a poem. Not everyone can understand art.
     
  3. We need some sean in here

    Too many haters

    Support
     
  4. Did you write this?
     
  5. Pooootaaattoooo
     
  6. I accidentally read the title as a word that I cannot post here, for fear of scarring small children.

    Good poem though.
     
  7. Lmfao
     
  8. They say I have a dirty mind.

    I prefer to call it a sexy imagination.
     
  9. Lol
     
  10. take this garbage to pimd
     
  11. I don't want to be caught playing pimd
     
  12. isnt that were u came from? :lol:
     
  13. yea man, I wrote this about 2 days ago. Idk if anyone besides me loves a good book/poem but I share anyways. It wanted out and seemed to have a positive message.
     
  14. No need to troll here. Only positive or influential comments only please. The poem is positive.
     
  15. Good job man, it's really good. I write but I'm awful :p
     
  16. Man just keep writing. Practice makes perfect, just like they say! Ive done this for over 15 years and its still new and exciting. I try to use it to speak to people in a way that a conversation wouldnt do. Just open ur mind/heart and let it flow, bro.