Oppidum Pecularis ~ Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -DaveStrider-, Feb 23, 2013.

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  1. This is where you post any feedback about my story. :p Please try to keep it constructive. Also, please, please, please tell me about any grammar/spelling issues! I am a certified Grammar Nazi. :p Yes, I do have a written certificate. I won my school's grammar contest. :lol: Anyways...thanks for reading guys!
     
    #1 -DaveStrider-, Feb 23, 2013
  2. Jolly good
     
    #2 Bandersnatch, Feb 23, 2013
  3. Looks great. :)
     
    #3 TF-The-Silver-Knight-, Feb 23, 2013
  4. Wow this is amazing !!!!!!!!!! Great story 
     
    #4 koolmade, Feb 23, 2013
  5. Looks decent.

    You have a tense shift in the beginning. Path twist. Something or other. Check that.
     
    #5 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Feb 23, 2013
  6. Chapter up.
     
    #6 -DaveStrider-, Feb 24, 2013
  7. Good job
     
    #7 L00KER, Feb 24, 2013
  8. Whee, bump because I posted the next chapter.
     
    #8 -DaveStrider-, May 28, 2013
  9. Great. I actually have a challenge now. Thanks dave! 
    Jk great read. Definitely top 5 material. Can't wait to read more.
     
    #9 Warry_the_Penguin, May 28, 2013
  10. Hahah, thanks Warry. Always nice to have an opinion. I'll post the next chapter now.
     
    #10 -DaveStrider-, May 28, 2013
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    #11 Warry_the_Penguin, May 28, 2013
  12. Looks like top five material bro good read
     
    #12 SL_COURAGE_SL, May 28, 2013
  13. Thanks guys! While I'm at it I might just go ahead and post the next chapter before I forget again |D
     
    #13 -DaveStrider-, May 28, 2013
  14. What the...
    I QUIT!!!
    Jk Great story.
     
    #14 Warry_the_Penguin, May 28, 2013
  15. Oops, these chapters are starting to show my kinks.

    Oh well.
     
    #15 -DaveStrider-, May 28, 2013
  16. ^ O.O
    Great read, though. Please write more
     
    #16 Invincible1707, May 28, 2013
  17. Chapter Six is out!
     
    #17 -DaveStrider-, May 29, 2013
  18. It's an amazing work of art
     
    #18 -Perspective-, May 29, 2013
  19. 'Course you would say that, Shock. xD
     
    #19 -DaveStrider-, May 29, 2013
  20. Whats that supposed to mean Kat? xP
     
    #20 -Perspective-, May 29, 2013
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