Operation Storm Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Bastion, Jul 6, 2010.

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  1. This will be feedback for my new story, Operation Storm. Please post all comments here. Post on that thread you will be farmed and not in story. Thanks!
     
    #1 Bastion, Jul 6, 2010
  2. Any corrections tell me too so I can fix them! Thanks!
     
    #2 Bastion, Jul 6, 2010
  3. Change fox to fix, lol
     
    #3 Godsninja13, Jul 6, 2010
  4. Bye Bast
     
    #4 iGalaxy, Jul 6, 2010
  5. What? Who?
     
    #5 Bastion, Jul 6, 2010
  6. **UPDATE** Story posted
     
    #6 Bastion, Jul 6, 2010
  7. Go to pal bast.
     
    #7 iGalaxy, Jul 6, 2010
  8. Nice like end of chapter or watever
     
    #8 roflman, Jul 6, 2010
  9. Good chapter
     
    #9 Godsninja13, Jul 6, 2010
  10. I'm in it! : D Am I a bad guy? :3
     
    #10 *RikaTsukikai (01), Jul 6, 2010
  11. You need to sign up first. That was my first draft just put in random friend names.
     
    #11 Bastion, Jul 6, 2010
  12. Oh okay. Want me to post it on sign up?
     
    #12 *RikaTsukikai (01), Jul 6, 2010
  13. Yes please.
     
    #13 Bastion, Jul 6, 2010
  14. Love it I'll sign up
     
    #14 Grimmy_RPM, Jul 6, 2010
  15. Signed up. :3
     
    #15 *RikaTsukikai (01), Jul 6, 2010
  16. Hey ur not bad lol
     
    #16 mathew057, Jul 6, 2010
  17. But hey osterly??
     
    #17 mathew057, Jul 6, 2010
  18. Rika you are going to be osterly's wife/2nd in command. (make zaln jealous)
     
    #18 Bastion, Jul 6, 2010
  19. Do I HAVE too??? He has an unhealthy obsession with peanut butter....!
     
    #19 *RikaTsukikai (01), Jul 6, 2010
  20. Yes! Muahahahahha.
     
    #20 Bastion, Jul 6, 2010
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