Operation:interception feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by german_idiot, Aug 29, 2010.

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  1. Tell me what u think
     
    #1 german_idiot, Aug 29, 2010
  2. sorry for cutoff pressed wrong button
     
    #2 german_idiot, Aug 30, 2010
  3.  good description! I know almost nothing about any of this, so I can't catch any technical mistakes
     
    #3 *iPimella (01), Aug 30, 2010
  4. It's pretty cool. But I'm still not in it yet huh
     
    #4 MagicV, Aug 30, 2010
  5. No mag ur not sorry
     
    #5 german_idiot, Aug 30, 2010
  6. It's sick
     
    #6 psycho_killer, Aug 30, 2010
  7. Good sick or bad sick psycho
     
    #7 german_idiot, Aug 30, 2010
  8. I love it! Ah i want to keep reading! Great beginning. If it comes out for sale I'll definitely buy! I'm hooked already. The whole betrayal aspect makes me wanna keep reading to find out what happened and why. I'll be following and looking forward to reading more. Awesome job so far @German!

    The Champ 
     
    #8 Sir_Bots_Alot, Aug 30, 2010
  9. Love it
     
    #9 detroit-lions-fan, Aug 30, 2010
  10. Nice german!
     
    #10 Marodo, Aug 30, 2010
  11. 
    30stars!



    Out of 3
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    #11 CrayzJayz, Aug 30, 2010
  12. I'm gonna guess that's good jayz lol
     
    #12 german_idiot, Aug 30, 2010
  13. Ya 30 out of a possible 3 stars
     
    #13 CrayzJayz, Aug 30, 2010
  14. 30/3
     
    #14 CrayzJayz, Aug 30, 2010
  15. Oh ok didn't c the 30 on the side their thank u though I'm hoping to get the next chapters up tomorrow
     
    #15 german_idiot, Aug 31, 2010
  16. Continue please :) The only downside would be that it's a bit tough to read due to formatting.
     
    #16 Luxanne, Aug 31, 2010
  17. What do u mean para
     
    #17 german_idiot, Aug 31, 2010
  18. Having multiple people's quotations stuck besides each other - looks a bit messy :O
     
    #18 Luxanne, Aug 31, 2010
  19. I think it's better then just sayin so and so said this and so and so said that the story would get stale and boring
     
    #19 german_idiot, Aug 31, 2010
  20. Oh I don't disagree ^^ I mean, either you could separate every quotation (once a new person speaks) into new paragraphs like they do in most writing, or keep the format but tidy the punctuation. (One of my favorite novels is formatted like yours; it's called Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close, and the format is definitely interesting to work with.)
     
    #20 Luxanne, Aug 31, 2010
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