One way

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Aug 28, 2010.

  1. One way

    I've a one way ticket, across the world,
    Away from my home, through the tides I was hurled.

    My backyard garden, never again,
    For I've a one way ticket, to the end.

    In the depths of the darkness, I begin to sing,
    A song about autumn, and what winter brings.

    The lights flicker on, and I'm consious once again,
    Only to turn off, as if nothing were said.

    I am always running, from what I don't know,
    But every step I run, I reach a new kind of low.

    Do not follow me, for I do not belong,
    And by the time that you read this, I will be long gone.
     
  2. What the hell
     
  3. Post feedback below
     
  4. I don't think I should.....
     
  5. That's not MEAN at all.
     
  6. Oh, and Chriz, I said post feedback below, insults can go above that.
     
  7. It's a pretty good poem.
     
  8. two thumbs up
     
  9. It kinda sounds like a suicide poem  its good tho 
     
  10. Yeah, it's a girl going insane, sorta like my checkmate one