Once again.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Requital, Dec 29, 2012.

  1. Hey all, just a little back ground info. I'm a former USMC infantryman, 08-12. I wrote this about some personal experiences I had in the Corps.


    I buried myself again today
    My stupidity can't seem to fade away
    Into the darkness I go -A 6 foot undertow
    Dragging me under cant catch a breath
    Staring him in the eye death-seems like such a nice guy
    Ill Give in just one more time
    It'll be the last I promise, I promise

    My world spinning i touch the sky
    Feels like I'm winning but I can't disguise the fear I'm feeling
    Digging deep, cutting close, im on the ropes, I'm in the scope
    A Trigger pull that feels so smooth
    Walking a dark path to find the truth.

    Stupid decisions seems like I can't listen
    I try to Pick apples but life gives me lemons
    Choose the right fork but it's a dead end
    These problems don't seem to mend
    Low water bridge and a drainage ditch
    A flash flood of my own ****
    I try to swim but i never learned how
    And No one can tell me now

    My world spinning i touch the sky
    Feels like I'm winning but I can't disguise this fear I'm feeling
    Digging deep, cutting close, im on the ropes, I'm in the scope
    A Trigger pull that feels so smooth
    Walking a dark path to find the truth.

    It's imperative, to break away from this self destructive narrative
    Writing the story on the run
    Turning the page before its done
    Before its done


    Repeat chorus
     
  2. I really like this. Well done, and thank you for your service.
     
  3. Thank you!
    And your welcome.
     
  4. Thank you!
    And your welcome!