Ok my poetry thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Sep 9, 2010.

  1. I've got alot on the go and need somewhere to post em so here is the first of a few please post your thought or your own poem etc etc

    To dance along the wings of angels
    To feel the see breeze on my face
    To see the world through closed eyes but a wide open heart

    To be with you every day
    You never leave my side
    I'll fight for you yes I will
    And never let you go

    I'll stay one point ahead of the game
    Anything to keep you safe 
    When things look bleak I'll protect you
    And keep you in my heart

    To never let you leave I hope 
    Is what I shall endeavour 
    But even if you leave my life
    You won't be gone forever

    I'll search under every rock to find you
    Your sweet voice calling me 
    I will never part from you my love 
    And I hope you feel the same

    But even if u deny me your love forever
    I will prove myself 
    A hopeless cause it may be 
    But one that must be fought

    To dance upon the wings of angels
     is what I wish to do
    To spend my life eternally
    Eternally with you
     
  2. I was banned from chat
    for no real reason
    all bc
    tmh can't read
    the rules he should enforce
    so please die in a hole
     
  3. I'd recommend using full words instead of abbreviations. The first one was good.
     
  4. Nice.... here is a better one !
    My bonny lies over the ocean
    my bonny lies over the sea
    my bonny lies over my face
    and....

    Roses are red, violets are blue
    when I step on your trachea,
    your face becomes the same hue !