Ode to NW.......

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by THE_VIXIN, Sep 20, 2010.

  1. Fear comes quietly to the silent mind, One lowered his shield and crossed the line
    Seeping into my soul like sand, Luring me to the forbidden land
    Past events can not be undone, I fear the territory you tread upon
    But most of all I fear for you, For all the dangerous things you do

    For swords not aimed true, And horses' hooves directed at you
    For fickle maidens who enter your heart, Taking all they can before they depart
    I stand my faithful ground undeterred, In spite of all that has occurred
    What is strange - I have finally come to see,,,, The only one you fear is me

    You were my first and best night - present, future and past
    The one and only true night, and you will be my last

    So I will wait while you roam, until you wander back home
    Oh Wayward Knight…
     
  2. So many fans and so little time!! I am ever so sorry my dear lap dancer! Maybe I will wonder my way back around to you one day! Until then I will just be my wayward self my dear. 
     
  3. Good, never subsitute ryming for rythum, but overall good! 
     
  4. Thanks for the feedback Lady-Marian! Feedback is a gift Really! :)