No Longer Human: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010.

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  1. Please write what you think of this story here. I am open to critisism. I still need more characters, so go to the NLH signup thread to post one if you haven't already
     
    #1 *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010
  2. AWESOME! I like how it's similar to dragonlance, yet differnt! Btw can I b a character?
     
    #2 THEBlade, Aug 13, 2010
  3. Sure just post in the sign up thread :)
     
    #3 *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010
  4. Just finished!
     
    #4 THEBlade, Aug 13, 2010
  5. Ya i get to be the 5th main character!
     
    #5 DarkFalcon, Aug 13, 2010
  6. I want more please
     
    #6 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 13, 2010
  7. That's what she said!
     
    #7 THEBlade, Aug 13, 2010
  8. This is prolly just coincidence but this sounds a little like Blackwind.....hmm..... Lol jkjk
     
    #8 *Utho (01), Aug 13, 2010
  9. Wow...
     
    #9 DarkFalcon, Aug 13, 2010
  10. @utho: Thats what i said
     
    #10 DarkFalcon, Aug 13, 2010
  11. This story looks really good so far. :3
     
    #11 *RikaTsukikai (01), Aug 13, 2010
  12. When's the next chap with the anti war ppl?
     
    #12 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 13, 2010
  13. The story in centered around aynia and her gang, but the antiwars are soon going to make an appearance
     
    #13 *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010
  14. 
     
    #14 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 13, 2010
  15. Chapter One and Two are Up.
     
    #15 *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010
  16. Wtf is it with trying to copy chad stfu i doubt no would read it.
     
    #16 *iownyoustfu (01), Aug 13, 2010
  17. (flexs muscles) sup Blade. I left ya in piece this time
     
    #17 *Utho (01), Aug 13, 2010
  18. In one piece whoopsey
     
    #18 *Utho (01), Aug 13, 2010
  19. Donde esta Luke
     
    #19 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 13, 2010
  20. Where's Luke?
     
    #20 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 13, 2010
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