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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *krypton134 (01), Oct 12, 2010.

  1. I want to write my first story, see what it's like on the writing side of this thread. I've had an Idea for a story for a while now but havnt posted it because it is similar to a few others. Anyways if you want to be in it just post here.
     
  2. Ok I'd like to throw my 2 cents in but five us a time era and a basic outlay
     
  3. *give my bad
     
  4. I'll help if I like it.
     
  5. Here's the first part of the story, add characters accordingly.

    Sweat poured down his face, dripping at his chin. His sword, stained with the blood of his prey, burned a glowing hot red. His senses and reactions, intensified from his adrenaline. He notices everything around him, the ripples in the water, how many there are, and how fast they are moving, gives him an indication of how powerful his enemy is, as water from the nearby puddles, rise. He feels the tremors in the ground, as giant spikes rise from the earth, contending with the rising water. He hears the vibrations in the wind, as assassins of the air try to cloak themselves invisible. He even notices the flash of lightning, headed straight towards him. Most would think it was just a normal lightning bolt, but he could see it clearly, a warrior, the upper half of his body clearly visible, while the lower half (from the waist down) was pure lightning, stretching all the way back up to the thunder clouds. He sees the warrior raise his sword. A small grin appears on his face, his left arm ,now outstretched, begins to glow a bright red. "FIRA GIGA ENCOMPISA"

    Don't Want to write to much it could give away the story. Anyways that's the beginning of chapter one. Sorry If there are some mistakes, this was just a rough copy, I posted this on my iPod and sometimes it does that auto correct thing. Hope you like it.
    Oh important: this might give away some of the story but you need to no this if your going to write a character. This story
    Is about a bunch of gamers who think they are going to be the first ones to play a new game but are actually transported to another dimension where they each gain elemental attributes and powers. The story Is full of action, plots and twists. Have fun wrighting characters, can't wait to read some.
     
  6. I'm impressed. I'm usually not into fantasy, but you wrote that out very well.
     
  7. Classes can be anything you want
    Except for summoners and Druids (shape
    Shifters)

    I don't really have a form for you to fill out because not much people follow them anyways haha :D. The only thing I ask is for you to make a character and choose his element. Only 2 per element. Elements are earth, wind, fire, water, lightning ONLY. First in first serve.
     
  8. Let me get back to you tomorrow. I'm too tired right now.
     
  9. Haha alright mate :D good night.
     
  10. Meh I'll give it a go ok
    name:Lysander
    class: warrior
    attribute/element: earth
    weapons: basicaly a hoplite that controls earth
    bio: lysander is male who is from corinth and loves Greek history and is 21 years old uh you take him
    from here
     
  11. That's the kind of stuff I'm looking for thanks. I need to study Greek history.
     
  12. Also I don't have a name for this story haha, any suggestions?? Well I've got school soon and will be buisy tomorrow with sports and homework, I should have the first chapter up by Friday or Saturday, depending on how I feel about the story.
     
  13. Idk lol. A random suggestion
     
  14. Name: Cain
    age: 19
    element : fire
    weapon: fire Trident
    class: Mage
     
  15. That's a bit short but ok I'll see what I can do with that.
     
  16. Could I be in the story and awesome imagination
     
  17. Name: Samuel
    Age: 21
    class: warrior
    element: air
    bio: he is from Washington, DC. He loves sports and video games.... And women. He is normally a fun loving guy but knows when to get serious. He sticks up for people weaker or smaller than him rather than bully them like alot of people.
     
  18. Anyone can join m8 just post your character, most will be in the story. I don't want to kill the story in my head, but if there's a guy that is similar to the guy you post, don't worry, ok. That's all I'm going to say lol :D
     
  19. A girl!!! Every1 wants love