New Planet

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Planemaster, Aug 24, 2013.

  1. Day 1

    I guess this is my first diary/journal log book I should start writing in, I might even get a few bucks publishing this thing. Sorry for not introducing myself, Im Hayne, Hayne Cartwright. I don't really have any family at the moment, im a bachelor and i was the only offspring raised by my parents; who died in a crash 13 years ago. This made me perfect for the Space Colonization Setup (SCS for short) because if anything happens i wont have anyone going mental because there son dies, even with the iminent chance of death, the job pays good so its alright. We specialize in finding new planets for humankind to live on, Which is what im doing right now. Im aboard the Rodrickson S5-900 and travelling to Planet 4-7efr772 (Sciency is'nt it). We are scouting to Planet 4-7 (Ill call it this now) as a 20 man crew:

    Duncan Willis
    Patrik Davidson
    Clark Smith
    Stuart Beloham
    Angela Peters
    Jamie Parker
    Robert Smith
    Lester Ohannis
    Grace Ploser
    Jenny Hapson
    Steven Horden
    Lucy Paser
    Johnny Betar
    Henry Desmond
    Mark Luck
    Cally Casseedo
    Paul Elain
    Samuel Johannis
    Bruce Johannis
    Hayne Cartwright (me)

    So thats the crew, I should write a bit more tommorow and more when we arrive to Planet 4-7, so bye for now.
     
  2. Day 2

    Im not exactly sure wether i want to go to Planet 4-7 Now, Angela dug out some SCS issued books about the enviroment of Planet 4-7. It says that from space it looks like a barren wasteland but in the cover of the green clouds (yes green clouds, some unknown chemical reaction forms these green clouds) is a foresty terrain teeming with life. What irks me is that all the computer controlled robots have never returned like they should of.
    The SCS hate it when they lose equipment, The Ship im flying on costs billions and is sparkling new, I wonder wether they spent more cash on protecting this ship (hence the giant rocket launcher on top and 200 rps guns on the side of the ship) than us?

    Day 9

    Its been over a week on this ship and im desperate to get on that planet. The food tastes like my grans spongecake and the water is beginning to taste like wee.
    We have the planet on radar and are about to land in a few hours, I wonder what awaits us there?

    Day 9 13:00

    We have arrived, we're just preparing to go in to this place (no robot eating aliens caught on radar yet). I have to say im a little dissapointed about this place but if the book says its all in the green clouds, ill take its word.
    We have enough light-weight titanium to make shelters for two weeks and enough food and water for three weeks.

    Lets hope we get out here quickly.
     
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  4. Day 10

    Nothing to note yet but i did here a strange clopping sound, a bit like a horse galloping on tiles. I'll dismiss that as a figure of imagination but i've watched enough alien movies to know that i've got to keep alert.
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    Holy mary, Jamies gone, apparently he went for a squat in the rocks on the left but he hasn't returned in 20 minutes!
    God what is happening on this planet?

    Day 12

    I have'nt seen anyone squatting in the bushes since the incident, at least we can go back to the ship soon, it takes 5 days to get everything ready in the ship so day 14 is the day we go back to earth.