Born to become. Alive to see. Walking the path. Discovering me. Imagine the shock, Coming to find, No destinations Just what's behind. Never be free Never before Never be me Never to soar Here to exist. Here to survive. Crafting myself. Cannot be revived. Here to create, Approach the extremes. Here to make sense, And silence the screams. Never be fair Never in time Never aware Never's the crime Acheiving the goals. Strive to invent. Stretching for peaks, To slow the descent. Scripting my dreams. Attempt to inspire. Live at the top. Indulge my desires. Never I was Never am still Never because Never I will Never inside Never in sin "Never!" i cried Never again
I like your poems better than mine. I think they flow better. Plus you have a bigger vocabulary, so that always helps.