Neuroxandia: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SilverEmerald (01), Jan 5, 2013.

  1. Please share your thoughts on my story here. It would help a lot :)

    (Note: If you want me to put in a character of yours, please post in 'Sword of Death: Characters Needed' as this is connected to Sword of Death.)
     
    #1 *SilverEmerald (01), Jan 5, 2013
  2. I like it  Better than the other story imo. Good job, but still goin a bit fast for my taste. And one question, how did he survive spears and a freakin sword through his chest!? Lol 
     
    #2 -TwistedFate-, Jan 5, 2013
  3. Same as KD how did he survive spears and a sword and keep walking? Lol
     
    #3 -Narwhal, Jan 5, 2013
  4. He survived because he is actually a made of rubber and he just joined himself back together since he's invincible. God I can't believe you didn't know that...
     
    #4 Josephine, Jan 5, 2013
  5. Sometimes, I leave some details out because they fit in better later on
     
    #5 *SilverEmerald (01), Jan 5, 2013
  6. Oh, sorry for telling everyone the answer...
     
    #6 Josephine, Jan 5, 2013
  7. And the main character in this one, if you looked closely, it's a she. And no she's not made of rubber
     
    #7 *SilverEmerald (01), Jan 5, 2013
  8. Why not? It would explain everything... Or maybe he/she fell into a magic mud pit which grants you the power to heal heavy wounds when they were younger?
     
    #8 Josephine, Jan 5, 2013
  9. No it's a She either its a tree, its a living thing so it makes sense lol
     
    #9 -Narwhal, Jan 5, 2013
  10. Lol srry, just imagined it would be a guy  Anyway, great job, but pls slow down :( I think it would b a better story that way 
     
    #10 -TwistedFate-, Jan 6, 2013
  11. True dat it's way too fast lol
     
    #11 Josephine, Jan 6, 2013
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