Naruto Fan Fiction Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by bellalautner, Jan 22, 2012.

  1. Plz comment on how you thought I did, on Naruto Fan Fiction
     
    #1 bellalautner, Jan 22, 2012
  2. More punctuation please. I couldn't tell where on sentence ended and another began. Nor could I tell where there was a pause in speaking.
     
    #2 *xXDark-Forest-ForeverXx (01), Jan 22, 2012
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