Naruto Fan Fiction FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011.

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  1. Plz only comment here if you have read my Naruto Fan Fiction all comments will b appreciated no foul language or just flat out rude for no reason comments
    THXS
    -Bella
     
    #1 bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011
  2. Oops, didn't realize this was here and posted on the one
     
    #2 Anonymous_1234, Jul 13, 2011
  3. It's ok
     
    #3 bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011
  4. so did u like the story in general?
     
    #4 bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011
  5. Yes
     
    #5 Anonymous_1234, Jul 13, 2011
  6. Cool so what do you think I should improve on and out of 10 what would u give my story?
     
    #6 bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011
  7. Improve by fixing your spelling and making the vents more believable. I would have liked it if u put in a fight with Sakura and Kurai, like a big fight.

    I'd say, 6 and a half
     
    #7 Anonymous_1234, Jul 13, 2011
  8. Lol thxs a ton I will try 2 make more fight scences
     
    #8 bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011
  9. Ok, make sure u read my story
     
    #9 Anonymous_1234, Jul 13, 2011
  10. 8.5/10 make Saauke fall in love with Sakura or Kurai
     
    #10 Maisaka, Jul 13, 2011
  11. K thxs sis and I will read ur story anonymous
     
    #11 bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011
  12. I thought the story was... Interesting.

    Not the way I would have put it but it was real good.

    Writing stories like this, Could be a great way to become an Author... Later in Life.
     
    #12 Kasama, Jul 13, 2011
  13. ..thxs 4 ur insight sasuke how would u have put it?
     
    #13 bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011
  14. It's difficult to explain, but yours is still a great story... From what I'm seeing.
     
    #14 Kasama, Jul 14, 2011
  15. Oh ok
     
    #15 bellalautner, Jul 14, 2011
  16. Any other ppl care 2 comment
     
    #16 bellalautner, Jul 14, 2011
  17. Just updated my story plz read
     
    #17 bellalautner, Jul 15, 2011
  18. Lol SasukeXKurai 4ever! They're so cute together!
     
    #18 Maisaka, Jul 15, 2011
  19. Lol sasuke, you're like it was.... Interesting

    Someone likes Sakura XP
     
    #19 Maisaka, Jul 16, 2011
  20. Lol Sasuke,

    You're like; it was... Interesting

    You like Sakura?!? O.O
     
    #20 Maisaka, Jul 16, 2011
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