My story plot pls read and post!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Aug 14, 2010.

  1. Setting: deep inside a moutain a battle training camp

    "the new recruites are here sir"
    "finaly! What took so long?"
    "there were some troubles some of them were verry skilled"
    "isn't that the point!"
    "yes sir of course sir."
    "wake them up and send them in it's time for orientation!"
     
  2. So what's the story about? A training facility?
     
  3. Basicly the kids were kidnapped into the training camp they are going to be soldier but they remember nothing but the camp sound interesting?
     
  4. You'll want to make that clear then...through the setting, characters' actions, etc.
     
  5. I need names for characters
     
  6. Hmmmm....interesting....then it looks good. Needs spell check though
     
  7. You can use Utho
     
  8. Very interesting so far. Do you need just a name for characters or bio.
     
  9. Rorra Warren is one character I'm using for sure!
     
  10. Bio would be nice but I can't garuntee that I'll use anything sry!
     
  11. Oops it's Rora Warren
     
  12. No prob I like her:)
     
  13. Luke


    Personality: friendly but can become violent at a
     
  14. I like it tell me more any title ideas?
     
  15. Boot Camp Misery?
     
  16. Well...a bio that may work for a somewhat midevil story...

    Name: Sholron
    Age: 17
    Gender: Male
    Weapons: Dual-wields two longswords that are strapped to his back in an "X". Also carries a broadsword on his back that cuts vertically through the "X" of the longswords. Has throwing knives attached the the outside of his left pantleg for easy use.
    About: A calm and collected individual. Likes to think things through before acting. A brilliant strategist and tactician, and a swordsmaster on par with the greats of legend. However...although typically quite calm, provoke him and he will pursue you to the ends of the Earth the enact his revenge...and a quick death isn't how he enacts it...thing long, long and painful. Fiercly loyal to those who befriend him, and hostile to traitors and liars.
     
  17. Write first, title later