My sorry speech to a friend.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HoG_Chuck_Norris5340_HoG, Jun 18, 2012.

  1. Well I know you guys probably know that I made a mistake to a really close friend to mine in real life, by the way it's a she. I now some you you guys aren't religious, but bare with me cause I am a little. I am going to say sorry in real life, but I want it longer than just I am sorry so here it goes.

    I am sorry that I made the mistake to you I really am. I didn't know what I was thinking when I said that I really don't. I just didn't realize it would make you mad at me and I don't like the feeling of anybody being mad at me not at all.

    Somebody in my head told me to apologize to you, kinda weird I know, but someone did and his name was God. I would have apologized to you sooner, but when I had the chance you were gone. So I am really sorry I won't ever do that to you again. What I said I didn't know it would hurt our friendship that bad and I feel really guilty about it.

    It made me so depressed not being able to apologize to you, that I cried, cause we were like brother and sister and it hurt me a lot. So again I am really deeply sorry and I promise it will never happen again.

    So what you guys think?
    Sad
    Okay
    Needs more work.
     
  2. Stop.
    Right there, stop.


    If you know anything about apologies, and believe me, I've made my fair share. But you CANNOT write out a sorry. It becomes fake and controlled. If you're truly sorry, you will go with absolutely NO plan and just speak your heart. Make it mean something, because as of right now, your apology wont mean ****. I know it, she will know it, and you know it. My only advice, on any apology you ever make, is to wing it, and just lose your thinking process.


    Ie. Scrap the whole damn thing.
     
  3. Okay bump. I will try to do it differently though. Than what I said here, if I can't stop being so nervous about it.
     
  4. why is this **** in fan fic?
     
  5. Because this forummer hasn't even been on forums for a week yet? Cut im some slack. Melissa was on earlier, but there isnt a mod on forum atm.
     
  6. who cares. this is not fan fiction... or are you saying it wasn't moved and he placed it here? And who are you?
     
  7. Don't post this on Fan Fiction!
    And a real apology letter comes from the heart without thinking about it, I could tell u thought about it for hours
     
  8. Don't post here, and forget the letter altogether.

    If you're really as sorry as you say you are, with all this godspeak and whatnot, get off your whiny ass and tell her yourself, on the spot.
     
  9. Basically,
    I compilation of what everyone else said…
    Except maybe a few swears thrown in the mix.