My Song

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Expert24, Feb 2, 2011.

  1. I thought I could become a good song writer so here and post what you think

    There's a place for it to go but there's no place for you to leave. I thought I had it all!but when I saw your face I knew I was missing something.I relized that I needed you here.I had my friends and I had people to talk to I had a great life I missed the chance to have you too!So I tried again and again but I never got it rite!I just need to make it
    fine.if I did I would have it all and I'm trying again and again. But all I can Is try to make it better but I'm not sure how to all I can do is keep trying.please tell me what I can do.But I waited a few years and I was able to finally make it through.I got it all but I I messed it up and you feel worthless and I'm srry for what I did to you! And I'm sorry oh ya I'm sorry for
    what I did I want to make
    It rite so tell me what I can doooo. So tell me I want to change this all.and I love you oh ya I'm sorry for what I did to you I'm ganna change and make it rite oh i love you! Oh ya I love you oh yaa!


    It was made for my gf:)
     
  2. Hope you guys like it
     
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  4. Wow good song