My love...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *NecroHyphen (01), Jun 14, 2011.

  1. You play with my heart
    Every breath of air
    Like a poisoned dart
    You couldn't care

    My broken rose
    It was for you
    Your heart closed
    As did mine too

    My love for you
    It has been chained
    You have no clue
    As forclaimed

    This day is done
    My nightmare ends
    The setting sun
    We're just friends...

    Thank you
     
    #1 *NecroHyphen (01), Jun 14, 2011
  2. Ooh!
     
    #2 FeatherHunter, Jun 14, 2011
  3. Wow, beautiful poem though slightly sad.
     
    #3 Storallelite, Jun 14, 2011
  4. Surprisingly hard to fully get the emotion when listening to one of Skrillex's heavier dubstep songs… :|
     
    #4 Interrobang, Jun 14, 2011
  5. Nicely done
     
    #5 Platinum2, Jun 15, 2011
  6. That was..... Beautiful. It reminds me of my ex. I know that feel bro.
     
    #6 YagariHouse, Jun 15, 2011
  7. AWESOME POEM!
     
    #7 bellalautner, Jun 16, 2011
  8. Thank you everyone
     
    #8 *NecroHyphen (01), Jun 16, 2011
  9. This is adorable :3
     
    #9 *iPimella (01), Jun 17, 2011
  10. :)
     
    #10 *NecroHyphen (01), Jun 17, 2011
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