My First Poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Fangedwolf, Sep 30, 2010.

  1. Let's see what kind of comments this gets..





    Broken, Lost.
    Painful, Fallen,
    Stressful, crying.
    The world is in pain.
    The world is me.
    The world is everyone.
    The world is no one.
    Made of tears.
    Forged from rock.
    Crushed by man.
    Dreams are broken.
    Left in pieces.
    Hearts are shattered.
    Pieces blown away by the wind.
    Dreams are dying.
    Hearts are weeping.
    All in pain.


















    Sry it's sorta depressing, just sorta summed up a bad day.
     
  2. And trollers, I don't rly care
     
  3. I like it alot fang! Nice free verse!
     
  4. joyful,sad
    helpful,useless
    unhappy,happy
    all the same
    all the oppersite
    all the unimportant
    bored,intertained
    talkative,quite
    depressed,enjoying

    a little thing I made up