My first Poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Charizard01, May 23, 2013.

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  1. Roses are Red
    So is Blood.

    Violets are Blue
    So is water.

    I have a Knife
    Just like that guy.

    Now get in the Van
    Because I say so.



    :cool:
    Yea sorry I'm Bored, AT ate slow. 
     
    #1 Charizard01, May 23, 2013
  2. BTW, I have a poetry book thing I made awhile back.

    It's way better than this...
     
    #2 Charizard01, May 23, 2013
  3. Get out of ff until you decide to make something decent
     
    #3 Warry_the_Penguin, May 23, 2013
  4. ^^
     
    #4 -Quietly-, May 23, 2013
  5. ^^^^^^ what he said
     
    #5 Planemaster, May 23, 2013
  6. If it had a rhyme scheme itd b better,but it is still good
     
    #6 *stormyhazes (01), May 23, 2013
  7. ^ No, it wasn't. Don't encourage him until he makes something worthwhile.
     
    #7 Invincible1707, May 26, 2013
  8. Roses are red
    So is my anger

    Violets are blue
    No they arent

    I have a phone
    just like you

    Follow my orders
    Cos ill farm you
     
    #8 Planemaster, May 26, 2013
  9. Fail^^
     
    #9 Warry_the_Penguin, May 26, 2013
  10. At least he tries…he did good
     
    #10 *stormyhazes (01), May 26, 2013
  11. Roses are red

    Violets are blue

    But when I grow up

    I hope I don't look like you


    
     
    #11 -AppleSauce-, May 27, 2013
  12. Roses are red

    Violets are blue

    Want to hit me?

    I pity the fool
     
    #12 Warry_the_Penguin, May 27, 2013
  13. Yes lets do our own versions
     
    #13 Planemaster, May 27, 2013
  14. Roses are red

    Violets are blue

    You shower everyday

    But you still smell like poo
     
    #14 -AppleSauce-, May 27, 2013
  15. Roses are red

    Violets are blue

    NO!! VIOLETS ARE ******* PURPLE!!

    YOU DUMBASS FOOL!
     
    #15 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, May 28, 2013
  16. Blood is red

    Holy water is blue

    But enough talk

    Have at you!
     
    #16 -I-IllIl-EveOfRemorse-lIlII-I-, May 28, 2013
  17. Good one eevee.

    :cool: :lol:
     
    #17 Charizard01, May 28, 2013
  18. Like the poem pmaster
     
    #18 14lifekassi, May 28, 2013
  19. Roses are black
    Violets are black
    Trees are black
    guess its night.
     
    #19 Killzone, May 28, 2013
  20. Roses are red

    Violets are blue

    Justin Bieber's gay

    And so are you
     
    #20 Planemaster, May 28, 2013
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