My First Poem XD

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Apr 2, 2011.

  1. 1) I'm staying... Sorta
    2) This is legit my first poem

    People say it's easy, a very simple art
    And yet I sit here, unable to start

    People have tried to make me do it
    To force me to write an unsung song
    But here I am, laughing at their wrong
    For a poet I am not, even if I write
    School assignments don't help either
    They just waste my nights

    Some of you may say
    "This is a poem, if anything it be"
    But I can safely assure you,
    I can't write poetry




    That was probably bad...
    Comments?
     
    #1 cheesemuffin, Apr 2, 2011
  2. It was good 
     
    #2 Eagleking, Apr 2, 2011
  3. 
     
    #3 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 2, 2011
  4. Ironhulk stop being so mean! It was a great poem
     
    #4 *Onyxpelt (01), Apr 2, 2011
  5. great for a starter but try to make it more interesting next time how about try using PERSONIFACATION
     
    #5 *LeafstormXAshpelt (01), Apr 2, 2011
  6. Pretty good if it's your first!
     
    #6 Storallelite, Apr 3, 2011
  7. You forgot to include cheesemuffins.




    I don't even know you anymore!
     
    #7 Iceblade, Apr 3, 2011
  8. Grrrrr
     
    #8 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 3, 2011
  9. Hahaha! That was cool! I loved the rhyme at the end!
     
    #9 *lady-marian (01), Apr 3, 2011
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