My Adventures in KaW - The Beginning/ Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Secret-Blade, Apr 20, 2012.

  1. Post what you think so far, still thinking of more segments.
     
    #1 Secret-Blade, Apr 20, 2012
  2. It sounds awfully familiar...
     
    #2 Eagleking, Apr 20, 2012
  3. There's loads of kaw stories already...
     
    #3 Eagleking, Apr 20, 2012
  4. I know. This one is only for MY adventures. Not legends.
     
    #4 Secret-Blade, Apr 20, 2012
  5. It's still not very original...
     
    #5 Eagleking, Apr 20, 2012
  6. It's a good story though
     
    #6 Eagleking, Apr 20, 2012
  7. Short...
     
    #7 Eagleking, Apr 20, 2012
  8. Put it all in one post.
     
    #8 Eagleking, Apr 20, 2012
  9. Wow, huge rip of Cheese's and Feather's stories.

    Plus if you are going for the "retro" KaW, why is there Wulf?
     
    #9 Interrobang, Apr 21, 2012
  10. Lol
     
    #10 Eagleking, Apr 21, 2012
  11. Paradox, I don't really care if it's a ripoff.

    What I DO care about is if its a lousy pile of ****.

    It has some potential, just try working on grammar, description, and make the chapters longer.
     
    #11 cheesemuffin, Apr 21, 2012
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