Murder at Bristle Bog Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber03 (01), Oct 31, 2010.

  1. The title is self explanatory.
     
  2. Good so far. Just write more per post!
    ~Spottedleaf
     
  3. Good but just one question.....where's the pepperoni pizza
     
  4. Great description! I always find that my story's description is a little shabby. Maybe you could give me a lesson!
     
  5. The tacky titles will stop after chapter 3.
     
  6. I thinks Its fun to talk like that!