My second post here! Enjoy. Mommy Dearest Mommy: I don't trust you. Me: Who ever said I wanted your trust? I'm sorry Mommy that you stuck a knife in my back. Especially when I wasn't looking. Mommy: Don't lock the doors. I'm sorry Mommy, but you have been locked out of my heart. Locked out of the door containing everything good and kind. Mommy: Pick and choose your battles. But mommy...you fight with everyone... Mommy: I'm going to leave. One of these days I'm just going to leave you all. I'm sorry mommy dearest...I'm sorry you're still here. Mommy: It's all about you isn't it? I'm sorry the world doesn't revolve around you mommy. Mommy: I can take the truth but I cannot take a lie. But mommy...lies are the only words that escape your lips... Mommy: I can't even look at you. Then you cant look at your own reflection mommy. The monster you created.
I'm sorry mommy dearest that I hope you die. I'm sorry I want to escape your witch like talons and leave you. I'm sorry I hate you. I'm sorry I'm not perfect. I'm sorry I was born. I'm sorry your my mommy. I'm sorry mommy dearest.
This is about the relationship between my mom and I. The reason it's separate btw was cuz I was afraid it would cut off.
No prob. I made it redundant because I'm always saying sorry irl, for things I can't even control. I wanted to get that across to the reader.
Everyone. Please give me your opinions and thoughts on this poem, or suggestions. They are much appreciated!
Well, you know my connection. If your mom is a witch, my dad is an evil wizard attempting to be good and failing miserably. xD
Well, that's certainly... Interesting. I'm not one for poems myself, so I don't try to look for symbolism, but that's just dark! Like, psychological decline dark! Well done, just try to give it a little more flow next time. It seemed a little broken up at times.