misinformation: PROLOGUE

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Burningclaw, Oct 21, 2011.

  1. A fire ball flew past my head as Azua rolled away.

    Yes... Sadly this is what our school turned into... Bullies pushed the nerds to near extinction and the nerds bombed our school with toxic waist on there last stand. Over dramatic? Nope not in the year 3057. Society completely died after 2057 when the Astroid named ZZ-76 hit earth and plunged us into the darkness pasted the star named Pluto.

    I was born in a world without sun... With out rules... Just the power of shadows... Every law of science has been broken.... An object in motion stays in motion unless acted opon by another force? No baseballs just falls if thrown, after 3feet of 'hang time' it just "Pops" and falls.

    Either way without light after a while we ran out of power to supply light... With out light mutants with their powers of light where taken, murdered, and harvested... Trust me... I lost my family to that...

    Even as I thought about this there was a burning sensation in my lower butt area... I plunged back into reality... I wished I was wrong... But I wasn't... My ass was on fire....




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  2. All right no offense but it continues to surprise me how many people on KaW make so many mistakes, and how some stories seem to have no organization whatsoever.
    Not trying to hate, but if Earth was plunged into darkness by an astroid then all the living species on Earth would have died out very soon
     
  3. And your story isn't even the worst I've read
     
  4. :p actually if the earth was plunged into darkness we would still be able to grow food(grow lamps) and power from raw materials
     
  5. Your forgetting the heat from the sun. And farther and itd be to cold. Have you seen how much ice is on pluto?
     
  6. Have you thought about pollution that keeps all heat emitted from humans and passing stars
     
  7. Do you know how far away the nearest star is? Lol
     
  8. And passing to close to a star would be disasterous hehe