Me. Smith Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Apr 27, 2011.

  1. I just started writing a horror story, Mr. Smith. It's my first attempt at a real horror story, so please don't judge harshly.

    Post your opinion on it here.
     
    #1 cheesemuffin, Apr 27, 2011
  2. I need you

    R.I.P Elisbeth Sladen
     
    #2 Interrobang, Apr 27, 2011
  3. Wait, what? ^
     
    #3 cheesemuffin, Apr 28, 2011
  4. Well you should write more...can't tell if it's scary or not with so little.
    So far so good though
     
    #4 Storallelite, Apr 28, 2011
  5. This is confusing should I b scared or worried??
     
    #5 *Doctor_Fred_Weasley (01), Apr 28, 2011
  6. Harshly please.... I'm going for mildly annoying [​IMG]
     
    #6 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 28, 2011
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    #7 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 28, 2011
  8. I like it :)
     
    #8 FeatherHunter, Apr 28, 2011
  9. Feedback on chapter 2? Anyone? :(
     
    #9 cheesemuffin, Apr 30, 2011
  10. Getting scarier.
     
    #10 Storallelite, Apr 30, 2011
  11. Awesome
     
    #11 kila, May 1, 2011
  12. This is gettig alot better
     
    #12 *Doctor_Fred_Weasley (01), May 1, 2011
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