Masks - Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Chirabbit (01), Feb 13, 2011.

  1. ...

    That...

    Was...

    KICKASS!
     
  2. Excellent description and voice. I look forward to reading more .
     
  3. Interesting story so far
     
  4. I am interested
     
  5. In this story
     
  6. Wow...I am so confused..but also insanely intruiged. Great job!
     
  7. .... So... Lemme get this straight. Some guy wearing a mask is actually another guy who's in a place disguised as a normal guy but now in a different place, while being a different person than the two he already is!?


    I think this is the story of an insane person, no offense. To be honest, it's really good, but it's more confusing than Revolution ever was'
     
  8. They're lying, using trickery to make other people see them as who they're not.

    But seriously, half the time I can't tell if it's a metaphor or not
     
  9. I DON'T LIKE METAPHORS! D:
     
  10. Very good chi, i wish i could read more... but my internet crashed on both ipod and home pc :( so i cant read much of it... then again, i wish they had kaw on android then i could read more
     
  11. Nice story!