Madness Unleashed - FEEDBACK AND CHAT

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Jun 28, 2011.

  1. Feel free to post feedback on the story, and talk about it here. :D
     
  2. Very Interesting. I like some of the words you chose. Well done.
     
  3. I've improved. That's for sure :)

    I remember the good old days with my repetition XD
     
  4. Working on it now XD tomorrow, next chapter. And I'll actually make it a decent-length one!
     
  5. SUPER POWERS!
     
  6. Great chapter cheese! I really like it!!
     
  7. Yay it's nice! More lol!

    iZaln
     
  8. Feedback Stealer.

    :(
     
  9. The new chapter is a LITTLE longer :D I'm getting there!
     
  10. HURRAY FOR STARGOREY!

    (Star-gore-ray)
     
  11. I hate how they're in small chapters yet still give the readers a lot to imagine. I want the chapters longer! Lol.

    iZaln
     
  12. Don't use the "an" or "plus" symbols they cut off the post.
     
  13. Yeah... Stupid forums, cutting off good stories D:<
     
  14. happened to me before, had to wait a whole day until it would post :?
    now...moar!!
     
  15. Um.... *brain fart*
     
  16. This is so incredibly interesting.