Love's Destiny

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by no_lyn, Jan 25, 2014.

  1. Once upon a time,there was a girl named Amanda. She had a crush on a boy named Zack,but she was very shy....but one day she finally gatherd up courage to go tell him how she feels,and he said he felt the same way. So they started hanging out together,talking a lot,holding hands in the hall...but then they ran into Zacks friends. They didn't like amanda. She was shy,so she didn't have any friends,she wasn't popular. They said if he still wanted to be cool,and keep his friends,he had to ditch her. So he forced her hand away from his,then pushed her to the ground. They patted him on the back and lefted. Amanda and Zack couldn't even look at each other after that. Amanda became very depressed,she was all alone,an outcast. She felt like nobody accepted her.

    In high school Zack got a girlfriend,she was a cheerleader. Amanda saw how happy he looked with her,how he moved on so easily. It gave lots of metal,and physical pain to Amanda,because that's when she started self-harm...but in reality,he didn't actually love his new girlfriend,it was under peer preasure that he started dateing her. Well it tured out she didn't really love him either,she was just doing it for popularity,because as soon as one of his friends made the football team,she dumped him and started dateing the football player. Soon after,his friends didn't think he was cool anymore,so they replaced him. Zack became depressed, alone.

    Years later,he's so depressed,he can't take it anymore. He waits till night fall to go to the park to hang himself. When he gets there,he sees a woman. He asks why she's there. She looks down and says
    "Same reason as you." Then he looks down and sees the rope in her hands. She looks up and they make eye contact....
    "Amanda!"
    "...Zack?!"
    they both dropped their ropes and hugged each other. He wisperd in her ear
    "I'm sorry I lefted you....but i'm here now,and forever."



    THE END ^_^
     
  2. Damn I was expecting them to hang each other.
     
  3. love it
     
  4. Y didnt they die!!! They need to die
     
  5. No i like this ending better comes full circle
     
  6. Shdhuri grammar was so bad went blind. Thais jfofifm

    ~HF
     
  7. Really? Id like to see you right a story
     
  8. *i'd
    *write
     
  9. Im waiting?
     
  10. You actually want me to write a story?
    I'm half asleep but here goes:
    The story of Sabotager

    Once upon a time there was a noob, who was of such low intelligent that half of his writing was composed of grammatical or spelling errors. Normally this is something he wouldn't have to worry about and could slowly improve upon, but then one day he decided he and his incorrectly spelled name were going to go into the forums. This was a problem. Because he was such an idiot he posted in defense of a horrible story written on a sub first grader level he was immediately captured by grammar nazi's. His only hope was to write intelligently however he was unable to do so and was delivered to the trolls by the grammar nazi's, was eaten, and died.
    The End.

    ~HF
     
  11. The little signature at the end is dumb af
     
  12. An artist always signs his work!

    ~HF
     
  13. His? Heartfall sounds like a girls name. You must be beta af too
     
  14. Yeah alright whatever floats your boat dude. :D
    ~HF
     
  15. I know my story wasn't perfect...but please don't pick on Sabotager like that
     
  16. Kk. I'm leaving this thread now so you can bring it back on topic.
     
  17. Beta fag is gone? Wooo
     
  18. We all know this story is fictional. It cant even happen.
     
  19. Anything can happen
     
  20. Lol good story os its pretty true as this is my 3 miss spelled name it gives me character