love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by bellalautner, Jun 20, 2011.

  1. Love can be a dove
    Sent from above

    Love can be a curse
    But it can also nurse

    Love can be a power
    But can hurt us in a hour

    Love can be love
    But can love be pain?
     
    #1 bellalautner, Jun 20, 2011
  2. Plz post if it's good?
     
    #2 bellalautner, Jun 20, 2011
  3. needs work. its too generic
     
    #3 *nakedtortle (01), Jun 20, 2011
  4. ..well what do u suggest
     
    #4 bellalautner, Jun 20, 2011
  5. use more intense words right now its like a dr. seuss love poem
     
    #5 *nakedtortle (01), Jun 20, 2011
  6. ...thxs
     
    #6 bellalautner, Jun 20, 2011
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