Love Poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by IlIlIlIlI-Versa-IlIlIlIlI, Nov 12, 2013.

  1. Well I'm bored so I am in the mood to write a poem :lol: I'm not exactly known for poems but here is one that I will just whip up for you all :D

    A Shell:

    Once upon a time I was filled with misery,
    a type of despair that was easy to see.
    I wore this feeling upon my sleeve;
    Quite clearly, I appeared to be in need.

    Yet no one would would come near,
    I sat by myself looking into this broken mirror.
    I saw a shattered soul with a broken heart,
    the making of a shell being torn apart.
    Limb from limb, the pain was endless;
    I felt distraught, this depression was restless.

    My soul was in a coma, gone for a while.
    My face was blank, completely void of a smile.
    I felt like an empty shell of what I used to be,
    My being, my soul, my heart, no longer happy.

    After a while it all began to feel normal,
    Who knew being numb was considered formal.
    I wore the numbness like a suit and tie,
    A metaphorical mask for every last lie.
    Despite the fact of how hard I tried,
    I couldn't help but bring myself to cry.

    This feeling of being alone,
    was the best feeling that I've ever known.
    This feeling of being alone,
    is the only feeling I would ever condone.

    And just when I thought all was right,
    I met something strange that casted a light.
    This person that suddenly gave me sight,
    A clarity of emotion, a new will to fight.

    She was the most beautiful girl I've ever seen,
    Someone that you could only see in a dream.
    Yet this was real, at least it was to me.

    She mended my heart and filled my soul;
    To become happy, this was my new goal.
    I had a new meaning, a new purpose in life;
    A cause that made me put down the knife.

    She gave me love, that's all I asked for,
    It took a while, but there was eventually a door.
    She made me whole from outside to the core,
    I'm now complete; a shell no more.
     
  2. I actually really like this. Well done. 