Hey guys. Wow I've missed you all so much! Well, the reason I have been gone is I've had sport and exams - thats been my life recently! And other personal stuff…But its the summer break now, so I'm back :') however, I'm going on vacation for one week tomorrow, so the story won't actually start until then. Thanks for your cooperation guys! Nice comments please; it may seem that my writing standard has gone down but it really hasn't! -Swag <'3
I want to go on a murderous rampage and then violently rip apart several beloved possessions. 1) That wasn't even a blurb. That was a paragraph repeating the same bit of information. 2) THERE IS NOTHING. Essentially, the "blurb" says: "This girl is perfect and this boy is her 'match' but he doesn't love her." (something like that, I didn't read all that) 3) Following from (2), there is nothing to be gained from nothing. You gave us a statement, but didn't do anything with it. Are we supposed to imagine what happens? Are we supposed to sympathize with one of them? Your "blurb" was a synopsis for a generic teen romance "novel".
Okay cheese. You've most likely seen my previous blurbs. You know that I do not enjoy writing them and I basically can't write them. I asked for nice-ish comments. I guess you can't process that. If you are this against my new story, then I guess I will not write it. Don't worry about posting here guys. Cheese has made it clear that he does not want to read this, so I'm guessing that no one else does. Just let this thread die.
You can't ask for ******* nice ish comments. Some peop won't like something and some will and cheese just gave you constructive criticism because now you know what to fix.
Hey cheese and Pielordty u guys used to hate on Konstrikal... I need to tell him u guys don't just hate his work
Ah that bull **** again. Now a days forum noobs say everything is amazing. We tried to give konstrikal help but he didn't understand constructive criticism and went on a noob rage. Constructive criticism is a part of life, if you can not accept your flaws being pointed out and then finding ways to fix them you will never get better. It's just part of life.
Yeah, Kon didn't realize we tried to point out what he did wrong, and took serious offense instead of trying to fix it
What. Is. This. Serpentina, While some people aren't good with criticism, please, please, please enlighten me and explain to me why they think they can post on a perfectly public forum and NOT expect any type of criticism. I await your ever-enlightening streams of utter bs.
I have no idea, he is just terrible with criticism. He thinks he's good at everything, but when someone says he's bad he just goes ballistic
Exactly. So, there's no real reason to defend him when even you point out that he goes ballistic for no apparent reason.